This writer also does a good job of demonstrating how she's uniquely
qualified. Notice how in her resume, she puts her experience before her
education.2156 Cully Dr.
Baton Rouge, LA 70816
Mjones@aol.com
23 April 2001
Mrs. Gail Bishop
Director
YMCA Camps
7856 Old Hammond Hwy
Baton Rouge, LA 70809
Dear Mrs. Bishop,
At the suggestion of Steve Smith, I am writing you to inquire about
the YMCA's Christmas Camp you will be conducting over the holidays. I
would like to apply for the head camp counselor job during the
holidays. I feel that my qualifications and love for children would
make me a great asset to your program.
Presently, I am in my third year at Louisiana State University
working to receive a degree in Elementary Education. My overall GPA is
3.5 on a 4.0 scale. Currently, I am taking classes such as Child
Psychology, Children's Literature, Kinesiology and Public Speaking.
While attending school, I work as a teacher assistant at Wedgewood
Elementary in the after school program helping the children with their
homework and sports activities. For the past four summers I worked for
BREC as a camp counselor. Working with BREC, I was able to bring the
kid's horseback riding, lead a variety of recreation activities such as
soccer, tennis, swimming and organize programs for the kids to enjoy. As
you can see, I love to work with children and would love to teach them
the things that I have learned. I have also taken classes and been
certified in CPR, Life Guarding, and First Aid.
I am looking forward to talking with you about this position. You
can contact me at 753-2488 or Mjones@aol.com. Thanks for your time.
Sincerely,
Mary Harris Jones
Mary Harris Jones
2156 Cully Dr.
Baton Rouge, LA 70816
Mjones@aol.com
Objective: To be the head camp counselor for the YMCA
Experience: Teacher Assistant, Wedgewood Elementary, 1997-Present
- Work with students after school helping then with homework and
fun activities.
Camp Counselor, BREC, summers of 1996, 1997, 1998, and 1999.
- Work with 75 kids aged 5-14 on a daily basis.
- Lead a variety of recreation activities.
- Planned trips to take the kids on weekly.
- Worked as head camp counselor in 1999.
Sunday school teacher, St. Thomas More Church, 1997, 1998.
- Supervised 15-20 kids every Sunday morning.
- Organized Bible studies.
Education: Louisiana State University, Baton Rouge, LA
Graduate-Fall 2000
Major-Elementary Education
Related Courses: Child Psychology, Kinesiology (Coaching, First Aid,
CPR) and Children's Literature.
GPA-3.5\4.0 overall
Activities: Pi Beta Phi sorority
Campus Crusades
Soccer, Volleyball-8years
Honors: Received Toyota Motor Credit Leadership Scholarship-8 nation
wide.
Dean's List past 4 semesters
President of Pi Beta Phi
Chancellor's Leadership Scholarship
Personal: Mother baby-sits children daily at our house.