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The "Creative" Question
We recognize that all good writers seek feedback, advice, or
editing before sending off their essay. Tell us whose advice you sought
for help, the advice he /she provided.
During preparation of documents for my application, I attached
importance to the advice of my schoolmates and their parents who had
similar experience. Before setting about doing any writing, I had a long
discussion of three hours with chairman of the student union of my
school about the sketch of my plan. He suggested me to highlight the
following three aspects: (1) Demonstrating my interest and understanding
of economics through the actual experience of on-line commerce
activities; (2) Emphasis on the charm of my endowment of oriental and
western cultures mixed together; and (3) Exposing my exceptional
character to meet head-on with challenges. He also suggested me to talk
about the economics theories I learnt by myself in my Transfer Statement
and their applications in realistic economic behaviors, thus exposing my
understanding of economics and competency for future studies. Aspired by
his suggestions, I successfully finished writing my application
documents. I brought what I had written to him and we had more
discussions. Then I revised the document until both of us were satisfied
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